Take the first verse of "A Song," for example.
I thought no more was needed
Youth to prolong
Than dumb-bell and foil
To keep the body young.
O who could have foretold
That the heart grows old?
The answer to the question is "well, pretty much everybody, unless they believed in eternal youth."
I quite like "dumb-bell and foil." But though W.B.Yeats might have lifted the occasional dumb-bell, I doubt that he did much fencing (the 'foil').
You might also note that he is fairly liberal with his near rhymes ('prolong' with 'young') and doesn't worry too much about exact scansion.
He is better in a direct address to his heart in "The Tower."
What shall I do with this absurdity--
O heart, O troubled heart--this caricature,
Decrepit age that has been tied to me
As to a dog's tail?
I had a certain fellow feeling when I recorded those lines.
Another tick he seemed to have was an addiction to long titles. Such as: "On hearing that the students of our New University have joined the Agitation against Immoral Literature." "I see Phantoms of Hatred and of the Heart's Fullness and of the Coming Emptiness.""The Poet pleads with the Elemental Powers."
I thought: let's give it a try:
The Poet addresses his Heart with the News that
He has to have a Pacemaker Installed
Old Ticker, why have you betrayed me,
Fluttering, quivering, missing the odd beat,
Shaking the stylus on the EKG?
Is it revenge for my conceit,
Feeling so fit for seventy-six?
Did I push you too hard with the hiking and biking?
Is that why you’re playing these cardiac tricks?
Or was my diet not to your liking?
Maybe it’s simply our DNA,
Some maladjustment growing since conception,
The genetic dice just rolled that way,
Creating some electric misconnection.
Possibly it’s just the wear and tear of years,
The heartaches, strains, vicissitudes of life,
Those disappointments and those fears and tears,
Sorrow, regrets, omissions, anger, strife.
But life has also been so rich
With love and pleasure, beauty, music, art:
These soothe the soul, but cannot stitch
The tattered tissues of the aging heart.
And now for shocking news, my dear Old Ticker.
Down through our veins they’re threading wires
To goose you into beating quicker
To match the speed a longer life requires.
Sorry to saddle you with this encumbrance,
To make your pace beat faster than before.
Consider it as life insurance,
Covering the risk we both might suffer more.
“Your heart will last a lifetime,” I’ve been told.
“How true,” is all I can reply.
You’ve been a bosom pal, a heart of gold:
We’ll hang in there together, you and I.
Forget the intimations of mortality,
Just be very thankful we’re alive:
Let’s rather focus on longevity—
I think I’m going to shoot for ninety-five.
And now for shocking news, my dear Old Ticker.
They’re going to make you work much faster,
To goose you into beating quicker
With an electronic blaster.
Well, maybe ‘blast’ is just exaggeration.
The voltage will be miniscule
And only last a fleeting micro-sec’s duration,
And with the power of just a milli-joule.
All for now. I have the interrogation appointment in a week's time. That should prompt another entry.
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